Bart's (bt-spinoff) "Keith
& Dexter Part 2
(rough draft)
<From a file on a floppy disk>
Will,
This is the 2nd part. Let me know what you think.
Bart
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"Keith & Dexter Part 2"
As theu walked up to the bar, Keith kept smiling and looking at Dexter
who had this shy grin on his face Rupert was bartending, and he smiled
when he saw the two of them approaching. "So Dexter get lucky yet?" He
said when they finally got up to the bar. WHen Dexter lost his normal
cheeky manner, Rupert just shook his head and laughed. "So what will you
have lads?" Keith says, "Two glasses ale please." He turns to look at
Dexter, "That all right with you?"Dexter nods, then he asks Rupert
"Rupert, we're supposed to be meetin Michael, Joey, and the gang, is
anyone here yet?" Rupert answers "No you're the first one here, but your
regular table number 9 is waiting for you blokes. So Dexter, how was
'e?" Dexter starts grinning and winks at Rupert, "He was fair. Cute
butt, I'd give 'im a 6.8." Keith punches Dexter in the shoulder, "Cute
butt, hey? Seems to me you spent alot of your time 'examining' it. And
Rupert I'd give 'im a 6.5, the boy has potential!"
The make thier way to 'their' table. Sitting down, after hanging their
jackets on the backs of the chairs. Keith grins at Dexter, "What's this
a 6.8 only?" "Oh I forgot to mention thaatt the scores go from 0 to 6.8,
Keith you scored perfect." Keith gives Dexter's hand a squeeze and
chucles, "Well, I'm sorry you still get a 6.5 for potential. ... 6.5 out
6 points that is, you were better than perfect! ... Dexter, I'm in love
with you and I want the world to know." Dexter kisses Keith fast but
still feels that pink spark when their lips touch. "Just think Keith it
was only last night," Looking at his watch, "26 hours 32 minutes since
the start of ..."
Dexter was waiting near Keith's house, waiting for his boyfriend. He
still had trouble 'his boyfriend', he never believed that some one as
wonderful as Keith would ever be 'his boyfriend'! But then even his
cousin met someone, while Percy was no Keith he seemed just right for
Brian. B even had a smile on his face last time he saw him. Dexter was
hoping that Keith would getthere soon. Then he saw Keith come walking
down the street, he could tell it was him by the way he walked. All of
sudden, he was all nervous again.
Since it was till early, and there were a number of people still around.
Dexter gave Keith a 'friendly' hug. When he was done, Keith asked, "Is
that all." He grabs Dexter and plants a short but intense kiss on his
lips. "He then says "That's better! I've bloody well missed you." Dexter
quickly looks around and sees that no one seems to have taken any notice
of the kiss. "Keith, I've been thinkin of you all day. Before we head
back to my place, my sister and her boyfriend were still there when I
left, let's go to that little Indian place again." Keith grinned at
Dexter, "Sure Dex, I have a feeling that were going to need to be well
fed. This waay you can be the dessert!"
They walk side by side down to the "The Star of India" restuarant. It
was just their kind of place, good, hot and spicy food cheap. Keith
ordered the chicken curry and Dexter the tamboori chicken dinners. They
each ordered a tap beer. They sat a corner booth in the back. Where they
kept out of the line of sight of most of the other customers. Keith
moved his leg and it came in contact with Dexter's. Keith ever so
slowly, started to rub his leg against Dexter's. Dexter looked over at
Keith, "Hey buddy, what you think you're doin?" Keith stares back, "You
could say I'm trying to make a pass at the best looking bloke in the
place." "Well, you got our attention." "Our attention?" Dexter
smiling
into Keith's eyes, "Yeah me and 'Little D', if you don't watch out ,
pretty soon he'll be standing at full attention." "I don't know," Keith
says as he continues rubbing his leg against Dexter's, "I think I'd like
to see that."
Just then the food came. And the settled down to eat, while he had
stopped rubbing his leg he just kept it leaning against Dexter's. After
another beer and they had finished the food., the got upto leave the
restuarant paying the bill on the way out. When they got outside, Dexter
grabed Keith's hand and intertwined their fingers. So hand in hand the
walked over to Dexter's place. As they were getting close, Dexter looked
up the street and saw Reggie's car parked a half of a block down the
street. "Shit! They were supposed to be gone!" "What's wrong?"
"My
sister and her boyfriedn are still here, damn it! Wait ..." The two of
them come to a stop. "Keith, would you mind meeting Randi and Reg. We'll
go find out the deal is." Keith looks at Dexter, "We're going to have to
meet sometime. After all my boy friend lives with them, and this way if
the found me in the WC some morning, I won't scarethe shit out of them."
They head to Dexter's building and go in, climbing the stairs to the
third floor apartment. Dexter pulls out his key to unlock the door. It
opens on the kitchen where Miranda and Reggie are sitting with a look of
disappointment on their faces. When Dexter walks in and then is followed
by Keith, Miranda looks up and smiiles. This must be the guy that had
Dexter smiling all week. He is good looking! "So Dexter who's this?" "If
you give me chance, I'll introduce you. Miranda, Reggie this is ... this
my boyfriend, Keith." Keith's face lighhts up when he hears what Dexter
said. "Keith, this is my sister Miranda and her boyfriend Reggie."
Miranda kisses Keith n the cheek, "I've been waiting to meet you,
Dexter's never aid anything about you, but I can't remember when he's
been a better mood. By the way, you can call me Randi."
Dexter looks at his sister, "Randi, what are you doing here? I was
supposed to have the place to my self all weekend." Miranda gives Keith
an appraising glance, "And now I know why! Jeez, Dexter he's gorgeous."
Keith is turning a deep shade of red. Reggie adds, "It's the damn car,
it just stopped. we started to leave, and it just wouldn't go any
farther. I was going to check if it was the gas, but I'm waiting to see
if my brother can ppick me up. But the earliest we'd be leaving will
tomorrow, sorry."
Dexter looks at Keith, then at Randi and Reg, "Well, Keith is staying
the night, aren't you?" Keith shyly nods his head. "So if you two will
excuse us, we're going to go get into something alittle more
comfortable." With that they Dexter leads the way to his bedroom. After
they get in, Dexter turns and locks the door behind them. Keith takes
off his jacket and throws it over a chair. Dexter comes up behind and
starts kissing the soft whait skin at the back of hs neck. "Oh that
feels good." Keith can feel Dexter reaching around and start unbuttoning
his shirt. When Dexter has it open ed all the way, Keith turns around
and pulls Dexter's shirt over his head. When the hold on to each other
tightly, their bare chests so close they can feel each other's heart
beat. As the continue to hold each other tight, Keith says to Dexter,
"I think 'Little D' is standing at attention. Maybe he could use a
little air?"
To Be Continued...
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From: "Will Sommers" <WillemS@jmcs.com>
9/1/99 8:47 AM
Subject: Keith & Dexter Part 2
To: "Bart Matthews" <Brtmthws@jmcs.com>
Bart,
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"Bart's (BT-spinoffs) Keith & Dexter Part 2"
As they [misspelling] walked up to the bar, Keith kept smiling and
looking at Dexter who had this shy grin on his face. Rupert was
bartending, and he smiled when he saw the two of them approaching. "So
Dexter get lucky yet?" He said when they finally got up to the bar. When
[was "WHen"]Dexter lost his normal cheeky manner, Rupert just shook his
head and laughed. "So wha'll ya [ sounds more english,"what will you"]
have lads?" Keith says, "Two pints a {was glasses] ale please." He turns
to look at Dexter, "That all right with you?" Dexter nods, then he asks
Rupert "Rupert, we're supposed ta [they use ta when they mean to] be
meetin Michael, Joey, and the gang, is anyone 'ere [silent "h"] yet?"
Rupert answers "No you're the first ones 'ere, [ was "one here'] but
your regular table number 8 [I think table 8 is their table not 9] is
waiting for you blokes. ... So Dexter, how was 'e?" Dexter starts
grinning and winks at Rupert, "He was fair. Cute butt, I'd give 'im a
6.8." Keith punches Dexter in the shoulder, "Cute butt, hey? Seems to me
ya spent alot of your time 'examining' it. And Rupert I'd give 'im a
6.5, the boy 'as potential!"
They make it through the crowd [too any 'their' in the same sentence.]
to 'their' table. Sitting down, after hanging their jackets on the backs
of the chairs. Keith grins at Dexter, "Wha's [was "what's] this a 6.8
only?" "Oh Ah forgot ta mention that [misspelling] the scores go from 0
to 6.8, Keith you scored perfect." Keith gives Dexter's hand a squeeze
and chuckles, [misspelling] "Well, I'm sorry ya still get a 6.5 for
potential. ... 6.5 out 6 points that is, ya were better than perfect!
... Dexter, I'm in love with you and I want the world to know." Dexter
kisses Keith fast but still feels that pink spark when their lips touch.
"Jus [drop a lot of final 't's] think Keith it was only last night,"
Looking at his watch, "26 hours 32 minutes since the start of ..."
Dexter was waiting near Keith's house, waiting for his boyfriend. He
still had trouble with the words [seems like you forgot to write the
words out.] 'his boyfriend', he never believed that some one as
wonderful as Keith would ever be 'his boyfriend'! But then even his
cousin met someone, while Percy was no Keith he seemed just right for
Brian. B even had a smile on his face last time he saw him. Dexter was
hoping that Keith would get there soon. Then he saw Keith come walking
down the street, he could tell it was him by the way he walked. All of
sudden, he was all nervous again.
Since it was still early, and there were a number of people still
around. Dexter gave Keith a 'friendly' hug. When he was done, Keith
asked, "Is that all." He grabs Dexter and plants a short but intense
kiss on his lips. He then says "Tha's better! I've bloody well missed
ya." Dexter quickly looks around and sees that no one seems to have
taken any notice of the kiss. "Keith, Been thinkin bout ya [Sounds more
like what they'd say] all day. Before we head back to my place, my
sister and her boyfriend were still there when I left, let's go to that
little Indian place agin." Keith grinned at Dexter, "Sure Dex, I've a
feeling that we're going to need to be well fed. This way you can be the
dessert!"
They walk side by side down to the "The Star of India" restuarant. It
was just their kind of place, good, hot and spicy food cheap. Keith
ordered the chicken curry and Dexter the tamboori chicken dinners. They
each ordered a tap Double Diamond. [Got the name from Gary, he says it's
an english beer.] They sat a corner booth in the back. Where they kept
out of the line of sight of most of the other customers. Keith moved his
leg and it came in contact with Dexter's. Keith ever so slowly, started
to rub his leg against Dexter's. Dexter looked over at Keith, "Oi mate,
wha ya fink yar [just dialect changes.] doin?" Keith stares back, "Ya
could say I'm trying to make a pass at the best looking bloke in the
place." "Well, ya got our attention." "Our attention?" Dexter
smiling
into Keith's eyes, "Yeah me and 'Little D', if you don't watch out ,
pretty soon he'll be standing at full attention." "I don't know," Keith
says as he continues rubbing his leg against Dexter's, "I think I'd like
to see that."
Just then the food came. And they settled down to eat, while he had
stopped rubbing his leg he just kept it leaning against Dexter's. After
another beer and they had finished the food., the got upto leave the
restuarant paying the bill on the way out. When they got outside, Dexter
grabed Keith's hand and intertwined their fingers. So hand in hand the
walked over to Dexter's place. As they were getting close, Dexter looked
up the street and saw Reggie's car parked a half of a block down the
street. "Shit! They're supposed to be gone!" "Wha's wrong?" "My
sister
and her boyfriend [misspelling] are still here, damn it! Wait ..." The
two of them come to a stop. "Keith, would you mind meeting Randi and
Reg. We'll go find out the deal is." Keith looks at Dexter, "We're going
to have to meet sometime. After all my boy friend lives with them, and
this way if they found me in the loo [Dont often hear WC in the stories
but they do use 'loo'] some morning, I won't scare the shite out of
'em."
They head to Dexter's building and go in, climbing the stairs to the
third floor apartment. Dexter pulls out his key to unlock the door. It
opens on the kitchen where Miranda and Reggie are sitting with a look of
disappointment on their faces. When Dexter walks in and then is followed
by Keith, Miranda looks up and smiiles. This must be the bloke that had
Dexter smiling all week. He is good looking! "So Dexter who's this?" "If
you give me chance, I'll introduce you. Miranda, Reggie this is ... this
my boyfriend, Keith." Keith's face lighhts up when he hears what Dexter
said. "Keith, this is my sister Miranda and her boyfriend Reggie."
Miranda kisses Keith n the cheek, "I've been waitin to meet ya, Dexter's
never said anythin bout ya, but I can't remember when he's been a better
mood. By the way, you can call me Randi."
Dexter looks at his sister, "Randi, what ya doing here? I was supposed
to 'ave the place to me self all weekend." Miranda gives Keith an
appraising glance, "And now I know why! Jeez, Dexter he's blindin.
[Blindin is better than gorgeous don't you think.] " Keith is turning a
deep shade of red. Reggie adds, "It's the damn car, it just stopped. we
started to leave, and it just wouldn't go any farther. I was going to
check if it was the petrol, {they call gas 'petrol'] but I'm waiting to
see if me brother can pick me up. But the earliest we'd be leavin 'll
tomorrow, sorry mate."
Dexter looks at Keith, then at Randi and Reg, "Well, Keith is staying
the night, aren't you?" Keith shyly nods his head. "So if you'll excuse
us, we're going to go get into something a little more comfortable."
With that they Dexter leads the way to his bedroom. After they get in,
Dexter turns and locks the door behind them. Keith takes off his jacket
and throws it over a chair. Dexter comes up behind and starts kissing
the soft white skin at the back of hs neck. "Oh that feels good." Keith
can feel Dexter reaching around and start unbuttoning his shirt. When
Dexter has it opened all the way, Keith turns around and pulls Dexter's
shirt over his head. When they hold on to each other tightly, their bare
chests so close they can feel each other's heart beat. As they continue
to hold each other tight, Keith says to Dexter, "I think 'Little D' is
standing at attention. Maybe 'e could use a little air?"
To Be Continued...
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Bart,
Excellent. You still have to remember the dialect. You might wanna read
out loud the lines you have the charactcers say, and see how it sounds.
Wanted to get this out today. We're leaving in less than 24 hours.
Madison here we come!!!
Love,
Will
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